You’ve done one essay for me. It was about Alzheimer’s disease. The Introduction and conclusion were good. Body paragraphs were fine, but my instructor needed me to change it all.
First, body paragraphs need to be consisted of 3 body paragraphs, and you should talk about the stages as I have mentioned down. Moreover, each body should be structured of a topic sentence, supporting idea examples and concluding.
Early stage : body1
2-very mild changes.
Middle stage: body2
Late stage: body3
1-moderately severe decline.
3-very severe decline
You will also have to use transition words between each body paragraphs. Body paragraphs do not have to be long, but need to be well structured 7 sentences are ok.
You please use below links. The will help you with the stages: